Wednesday 30 April 2014

Raffle for a ride writing report!

This is my first draft of my writing about Raffle for a ride. This draft is in my writing book. I have worked extremly hard to get this finished, here it is.
(P.S: The stars mean this goes here!)


1 comment:

  1. You had a great written report I think you introduced it very well and ended it very well.
    I like how you used all of these describing words.

    Grace

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