Tuesday, 25 February 2014

Editing posts.

We are learning to edit our posts and save our first draft and the next to see the progress we have made. Here is our criteria for doing this.

We had to chose a post that we thought needed improvement. I chose my Kotahitanga post because
it because it wasn't described enough. Here is a photo of my first draft.

I have worked on it and now it is more detailed.

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